The Poetry Topic¿

[Ow 3 Hit]

....This topic is worthy of the bump.

Not really.

Topic is relevant to my interests, sir. ;]

[Jim]

Welcome back, sir.

[Guest Emote|Muse]

pseudo intellectual OP

[Eric]

i write lyrics, anything ranging from death metal to Folk,

THIS is one of my folk songs...

i enjoy the semi anti religious theme that i slipped in, i struggled with alot of personal issues when my grandfather passed like 2 years ago (ie drugs, associating with wrong people, ect..) but during that time in my life i felt like i wrote some of my favorite pieces..

i have 5 mead notebooks completely filled with different songs..

the song is called "a feast for the mice"

It's the small things in life that mean so much

so small so delicate they crumble with just one touch

from the hand of pardon that spews forth pain

can anyone relate to the miserable existence of this saying

to be walked and trampled on, leaving no-one to spare your life

living constantly under the thumb of a man filled with strife

this spite i feel is for you and you alone

crushed under the words that i chose to speak

living day by day amongst the meek

once again i feel week, but determined to continue on

for this path i choose is gladly my own

can anyone really cast the first stone

at a man who came for just one fact

but ended up with a carved tree stuck to his back

looking up to the sky for a brief moment of love

only to see, the clouds closed above

no one's home

so tonight i'm going out to see some friends

i really don't know where my night will end

but i know that if i let it, it will take me whole

and finally consume the depths of my soul

its the little things in life that mean so much

so soft so delicate but just out of touch

behind sealed glass we pray for an escape

lead us to the promise land

before we are laid to waste

sometimes the most luminescent rooms seem too dark

this cloud in my mind is hard to escape

its locked in my head and ready to rape

each and every thought that comes out

most are pointless

the rest i'm not too sure about

so don't sit and cry

i'll be here to wipe your eye

just for a moment i'll be still

and listen to what you have to say

but i can promise

i'll be gone one day

one day might never come

said the wise man to his son

after following a star placed in the sky

by something so real its almost impossible to deny

but i sure will try

tonight we'll be our own men

deciding our fate with a roll of the dice

for a cloak and a crown its a feast for the mice

to this i turn a weary ear and a half closed eye

you state the facts but i choose to deny

tangible evidence is what you provide

but an eye for an eye has left the whole world blind

so blind that even the light in your mind

has been extinguished and burned out by time

waiting for a promise that's really more of a wish

crossing your fingers and holding your breath

relying on a man, just a single man.

[lntoxicating]

This thread is occupied with a substantial amount of teenage angst. I entered unexpectingly and got punched in the face with emo.

[Beastdefire]

When did you come back and why?

[lntoxicating]

When did you come back and why?

Last night, to be precise. Why? Popular demand. Why are you here? take a load off, enjoy a cup of joseph.

[Eric]

This thread is occupied with a substantial amount of teenage angst. I entered unexpectingly and got punched in the face with emo.

tbh i dont really think mine's emo?

here's another..?  [melodic death metal genre]

Oh this ghastly curse,

has burdened me for far too long.

Tonight another moon,

tonight i will no longer be a man.

As red as blood, my night begins.

Rebirth twisting i feel my arteries bursting,

consumed by the fuel from an unknown world.

Held inside this blackness, destined to wail at the moon.

Shifting into my beast like skin,

my short lived reign of terror begins.

running rampant through the village,

fear is nothing, i haven't even begun to rape and pillage.

Foaming at the mouth and starving for flesh.

Never did i ask for this,

never could a being deserve this wretched torment,

my soul ensnared inside this cave of a body.

I have no choice but to let it consume me,

blood is thick in the air now, and dripping from my teeth

thank hell for this glorious escapade.

If there was a god he would have nixed me by now.

For i have no regards for his 'creations',

life holds no value to one with no life.

Tearing through all who oppose me,

my tears went unheard and now so will your's.

CONSUMING ALL IN MY PATH I WILL SHOW NO MERCY.

Walking up-right my claws unleash and turn everything to shit.

Killing at an unholy pace, my instincts arise.

The sky has doubled in size, and light begins to fill my eyes,

my incumbency over the meek mortals must now subside.

beyond the shadows this demon shall hide.

Not to be seen again until HIS TIME!

[gfdgfd]

sad emo kid eric sad

[lntoxicating]

Summoner Name: Boklau

You fucking thief. THIEF. OP > you. THIEF.

On the topic of emos: That kinda seems like some iron maiden-esque lyrics.

[Env]

OMFGG ITS OW 3 HIT!!!!!!!!!!!

SUP FAGGOT!!!!!!!!!!!

[mlaK]

roses are red

your waffle is blue

get it sorted or no sex for you

this is the best one so far XD

[Jimel | Tyson]

This is gonna be a hard one. Who is this Song about?

Wake up in the morning feelin' like der fuhrer

Write mein kampf. tell Germany im gunna make race purer

Before i leave fuck my niece, with Eva Braun too

Cuz when i leave for mein reich I'm gunna kill some jews

Im Talkin

Taking off all thier clothes clothes

Gassin them til they choke choke

Throwin em in some stoves stoves

Goose Steppin

Right into all your cities

Spreadin the nazi Party

Tryin to take over your country

Dont stop, Make en Drop!

Nazis Blow your cities up!

tonight, they gunna fight

'til you give into the reich

Now Thats Real poetry

[Shut Up Kid]

When did you come back and why?

Last night, to be precise. Why? Popular demand. Why are you here? take a load off, enjoy a cup of joseph.

He's not talking to you idiot, talking to ow 3 hit the legend.

[Ow 3 Hit]

pseudo intellectual OP

Making assumptions on the internet. You need a self-esteem boost? This Poetry was written when I was 14, and am slightly laughing at it. Was going through my teenage angst, so you have a point. Lol.

And too Bullet, which I think is directed towards me.

I came back to apply for FOE. I thought we were friends! :O!!

[Steroids]

What are you on?

Lol im messin but 200 poems? Surely another hobby such as stamp collecting might be more productive.

I was wise beyond my years.

[watch me tb]

A Simple Love Story (Caked in Lies and Hate)

One day it will all be over

I'll be able to settle down

Without you on my tail

Or trying on my crown.

You live for the joy of malice

You love to cause me pain

You love to hurt those around me

You're trying to get close again.

I won't let that happen

I'm more prepared this time

Aware of your sly tricks and disguises

Now your heart's on the line.

It's a gamble with consequences

Win or lose you're screwed

I've got you all worked out

You're going to get bruised.

(Place your wager on the dying horse

Giving in to the stronger force)

In open battle I'll defeat you

The one who held my hand

I'll unmask you and denounce you

To all across the land.

I wish we could've been

Close like before

But you set the ball rolling

To crash down on the floor.

You'll get my boot in your face

I'll follow this sacred art

I'll put you in your place

You shouldn't have broken my heart

(Torture and pain, mutilate and maim)

The conclusion couldn't be brighter

Than the future I see for myself

Leaving the past in the past

Drawing from my great wealth.

You can't possibly compete with me

I know your fatal flaw

You hate me and you love me

You're still wishing, wanting more.

It is now time for me

To turn the tables around

I'll end this for once and for all

Your wits I shall confound.

Wake me when it's over

In your sweet and calm embrace

A life without you here

I know I cannot face.

[Adolesc3nt]

3 hit don't even bother with this guy. He won't be here long

sky pilot7 btw

[gfdgfd]

3 hit don't even bother with this guy. He won't be here long

sky pilot7 btw

Lol oh you're sky pilot7, wasn't sure who you were o.O

[gfdgfd]

He's not lying, and he's a solo rapper, not in a band.

[Ow 3 Hit]

He's not lying, and he's a solo rapper, not in a band.

Every rapper is solo.

And this just makes me LOL even harder.

[watch me tb]

He's not lying, and he's a solo rapper, not in a band.

Every rapper is solo.

And this just makes me LOL even harder.

why..?

[gfdgfd]

He's not lying, and he's a solo rapper, not in a band.

Every rapper is solo.

And this just makes me LOL even harder.

No? There are rap "bands" eh idk what to call em lol. Crews...? Example; Bone Thugs N Harmony.

[Shut Up Kid]

On a side note 3 hit what was your Fi forum name, you werent pig benis ko were you?

[Ow 3 Hit]

Was LOLWUT?!