i rap.

[iTz LuKe]

Hey. I havent posted much on the forums lately, its been a long ass time; but I've got back into Runescape. Last time I played, I wasn't rapping. Now I am. So I figured I'd share some of it with you.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hKRl73usraU

[Ep]

Good shit ther

Keep it up

[plex]

hKRl73usraU

[plex]

[Silk]

Rap battle me on teamspeak brO

[Hex`]

No offense but those lyrics were really bad

[gfdgfd]

flow - good

voice - good

lyrics - shit

[Octavarium]

work on lyrics. internal rhyme, complex similes. use them

[iTz LuKe]

flow - good

voice - good

lyrics - shit

Thanks for the criticism homie.

work on lyrics. internal rhyme, complex similes. use them

Will do. but I'm not trying to be an MC droppin' crazy punchlines, metaphors and set ups.

If you peep most my music, its just therapy; the 16 bars a week is probably the only songs/verses where its at an MC standpoint.

No offense but those lyrics were really bad

No offense taken. An opinion is an opinion. I just wish people said this earlier, tbh; lmfao. I never really hear criticism, its just about how great I am most of the time; and so its dope to hear something different, even if its just hate and not criticism. The only hate I get is like "youre not black" or "u look stupid with your braces" most of the time.

Braceface since I was 15. Reppin' it up <3 ;)

[Ollie]

Nice job tbf

[Swag]

Your flow & voice is really good, the lyrics need some work, Keep it up brah.

[Adam|Note]

Why is it that Americans sound good even with pretty diabolical lyrics. Take a horrorcore approach with your next video please, but not that whack Tyler the Creator type shit. Complex dark bars.

[NOOB]

Keep it up

[d1nn3r]

not bad

[Sopuli]

Don't really listen that much to rap but that was pretty good, keep it up.

[Joose]

I'll rap battle you man =] Let's have some fun.

[MakaveLi]

decent, i rap too hit me up if you wanna battle on team speak or anything haha