Travis - Chill (Prod. By Harry Fraud) (Rap)

[Travistherap]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PN3Z5RiIq4M

 

Hello, Im an new artist who just started rapping. And I would like to get some feedback on the track. I know I'm expected to be flamed. But I wanted to post and share anyway. Help me spread this around to get 100+ clicks. So I would like honest-feedback for this one. Comment/Like/Hate/Appreciate! Thanks you!

 

[Str in sara1]

[N0 S0UL]

U didn't make an intro but u post this lol... Lyrics aren't even that good

[R 4 P 1 D Z]

[Travistherap]

U didn't make an intro but u post this lol... Lyrics aren't even that good

I forgot to make one lol. But ok, Thanks for your honest feedback.

[Disappointed]

@ the guy who made this, you probably have better lyrical ability then half the guys who will say the lyrics aren't good. I'm not qualified nor is anyone here to judge your rapping, but overall I think it's catchy.

[Travistherap]

@ the guy who made this, you probably have better lyrical ability then half the guys who will say the lyrics aren't good. I'm not qualified nor is anyone here to judge your rapping, but overall I think it's catchy.

Thank you man! I really appreciate your honest feedback. I'll definetly keep that in mind.

[Co0kiezs]

dislike botted

[Andrew]

hi im gonna post this on every runescape clan's forums

 

boy oh boy i sure hope some guy will give me my first break on a runescape forums

 

runescape forums

[N0 S0UL]

hi im gonna post this on every runescape clan's forums

 

boy oh boy i sure hope some guy will give me my first break on a runescape forums

 

runescape forums

L0l

[Tony]

 

l0l

[Travistherap]

hi im gonna post this on every runescape clan's forums

 

boy oh boy i sure hope some guy will give me my first break on a runescape forums

 

runescape forums

Thats the plan lol. But seriously, I just wanted to post it though.

[Travistherap]

Feel free to comment!

[Travistherap]

bump.

[Saul Green]

You just started and you can tell in your rhyme choice. Its real generic without meaning and you don't have your own style. Those are things you develop over years. Rap as much as possible and join some rap battle forums. Just do me a favor and every time you make a song do it with a purpose. Also keep practicing mixing songs together cause that's half the battle haha