Hello, Decide for me Please.

[Zrarchy]

Hey guys, i've recently attempted to edit videos.

These are 2 Intros i've worked on.

Please leave your opinions on how i should fix them, they aren't perfect  :(

Intro One:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_51YN-finUY&feature=related

Intro Two:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dd2-BbFwCB0&feature=related

Don't be too harsh  :p

[Octavarium]

i prefer the second one if it was longer like you said. just take the runescape logo off the top, you don't need it and it looks a little silly imo.

first one is pretty good though but it's hard to focus on 3 clips at once in find. maybe I'm just rubbish.

[Boring_Ffs]

i think the second one is better ,but whats the song of first one?

EDIT: nvm found it in credits

[g0dsword y0]

Nice in editing ;)

[Cal]

Second one was better

[Dutch Ork]

first one.

[RiskAddict]

I liked 1 alot better than 2.

Maybe add a poll? :p

[Mori]

Both suck soz, everyone can do that on vegas

This is what I call an intro pretty long:

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[Logan|Ravaged]

I liked them both but i perfer #2

[RiskAddict]

Both suck soz, everyone can do that on vegas

This is what I call an intro pretty long:

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Begin of that was good but you couldn't even see the hits in the end, it's what you prefer and what you make is not what I prefer.

[clat]

nice.

[Zrarchy]

yeah i added a pole x]

[Teeky Pk]

Both are good.

[Reel]

2nd one by far