Royal Extacy Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I am currently working on a song, and am currently at the stage of a the second draft. So can you please tell me the bad parts about this draft (Please leave out "bad singing" because i already know that) Thank you in advance: J_I8xnuDxcs
Devlz Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 1. Fix the guitar. 2. Acually I did like some parts of the lyrics. 3. Singing isn't that bad. 4. DOES THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FUCKING RUNESCAPE ???
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gfdgfd Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 Oh so it IS you then, rofl. Every single one of your posts has been you singing, most of the topics you've acted as if it's somebody else so that if people took the piss you could join in and keep your pride, I thought it was you all along, FOE is not the x factor, if EVERY SINGLE one of your posts is going to be your singing, then go find a different forum.
Azburn Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 4. DOES THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FUCKING RUNESCAPE ??? this is off-topic dumbass..
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Coweyy Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 I think all your "Kid plays runescape" vids are you.... I see what you did there :O oh and your soft voice and acoustic guitar doesint match with the electric guitar rift just pick one guitar and stick with it.
Mikey` Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 make the intro chords, not that single string riff cuz that sounds so bland. less distortion when the electric guitar comes in, it drowns out your voice. solo was unnecessary honestly, something much simpler would fit the song much much better. voice goes off pitch a few times, but i guess thatll come with time.
VxT Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 4. DOES THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FUCKING RUNESCAPE ??? this is off-topic dumbass.. Did you ever think that the topic might have been moved? Use your brain before you type.
I C0NN0R I Posted October 17, 2010 Posted October 17, 2010 4. DOES THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FUCKING RUNESCAPE ??? this is off-topic dumbass.. because it's been moved by mods DUMBASS
I All Pr0 I Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 4. DOES THIS HAVE ANYTHING TO DO WITH FUCKING RUNESCAPE ??? this is off-topic dumbass.. because it's been moved by mods DUMBASS CONN0R GTF0 JEW
Beg-For-M3rcy Posted October 18, 2010 Posted October 18, 2010 Lyrics are good, idk what you use to record but its kinda choppy but if you can fix that pretty good song imo.
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