severed arow Posted May 27, 2010 Posted May 27, 2010 I made this one this morning, its a compeltely new style for me i think i was just palying around this morning :) what do you think? or OLD: here's somin i whipped up quickly before bed but which version do you think is betteR? or Thanks :)
d72 Posted May 27, 2010 Posted May 27, 2010 Meh... It's really bland and boring in my opinion, and the text could be a lot better. On the first one the fire on the right is too heavy and throws off the rest of the picture... It looks really chaotic and tacky in my opinion. Also, in regards to the bottom one, I like how the fire's toned down and evenly placed on both sides, however whatever's covering the stock's face on the lefthand side is really throwing me off of the image :p Just try and clean them up a bit and make sure everything stays porportionate, as well as trying to maintain the flow of the image the best you can.
Gareth l Rare Posted May 27, 2010 Posted May 27, 2010 Remove text. Both have different qualities i like. 1st is nice but id blend in the render bit more/ match him with the theme colour (wht i would do) and i like the fire. 2nd is also nice and eye catching but the line on the right doesn't fit and the gray around the renders head and smudgy blurs on the right doesn't look right. but over all i like it bro. Night
severed arow Posted May 27, 2010 Author Posted May 27, 2010 KK thanks as i said it whipped it up before i wanted to go to bed it literally took 5 mins :P text i just threw in i didnt want to put any on but .... i havnt finished them i just didnt know which way i wanted to go so i posted em here :L
severed arow Posted May 28, 2010 Author Posted May 28, 2010 I made this one this morning, its a compeltely new style for me i think i was just palying around this morning :) what do you think?
d72 Posted May 28, 2010 Posted May 28, 2010 The text just isn't doing good :\ Try and make your signatures without text man, seriously all it tends to do is just take away from the image. The only reason why I bother putting text on anything I make is because it's asked of me to be honest :p
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