Need CC on this picture before i colour

[severed arow]

OK i need to work on my pixels so here i a new attempt if i colour this in it is ok? What do i need to fix in this? ect ect ect

CC basically please

Edit:

i forgot to add the pic :L

[Cal]

I really like it the only bit i dont like it is the smudging around the letters if u get me

[severed arow]

I really like it the only bit i dont like it is the smudging around the letters if u get me

:L woops iforgot to post what you are ment to be ccing! wtf were you ccing?

[d72]

I don't know... The anatomy needs a bit more work and I get how he's stabbed the other guy with the dagger, but it kinda looks like he's gonna give him a noogie or something lol

[severed arow]

I don't know... The anatomy needs a bit more work and I get how he's stabbed the other guy with the dagger, but it kinda looks like he's gonna give him a noogie or something lol

:L ok how can i make it more liek hes getting stabbed then do you think?

[d72]

There's no real way I could tell you unless it's coloured, you'll have to go to Devlz or Connor for that one :p

As for the rest, before you spend the time colouring it, you should get the anatomy of the characters done right, especially with the arms. Also, the character's face should be refined a bit more; it's looking a bit linear and cheesy tbh :s

Keep going though! :D

[severed arow]

ok thanks d72 :)

[Cal]

I really like it the only bit i dont like it is the smudging around the letters if u get me

:L woops iforgot to post what you are ment to be ccing! wtf were you ccing?

oh shit i thought i was supposed to be ccing your sig lol, i mustve been whacked out of my mind on drugs man sorry

[Stand]

Love the originality of the piece. I didn't see the stabbing at first but not I do. Like d72 said, work on the anatomy severed. The guy on the right has legs too long for his body, arms too short.

Great sense of impact (with the hair and hat) but add that impacted look to the clothing, only slightly though.

Love your works severed keep up the originality and creativeness, the rest will come with practice :nice:

[severed arow]

Love the originality of the piece. I didn't see the stabbing at first but not I do. Like d72 said, work on the anatomy severed. The guy on the right has legs too long for his body, arms too short.

Great sense of impact (with the hair and hat) but add that impacted look to the clothing, only slightly though.

Love your works severed keep up the originality and creativeness, the rest will come with practice :nice:

Thanks stand means alot coming from a pro pixeler like you :) and ok ill ad impact to the clothes and sort out the guy on the right anatomy is the guy on the lefts anatomy ok (y'know except from his face...)

[I C0NN0R I]

I really can't tell whats going on around the guys head, the capes look kinda strange, the shape of the hats is off, the mouth looks wierd, probably coz he has no lips, just make the mouth a line or something.

definitely fix it up b4 u colour it  :nice: