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some shit i made for american airport


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looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes

point them out, im curious 

 

Where it says "24:00 hours access" I'd just use '24-hour access' (if you decide to put the words on top of each other it doesn't have to be hyphenated)

 

And also: Customs Clearance (not clearence)

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looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes

point them out, im curious 

 

 

after surf air theres a comma and then an and. But thats not really noticeable anyway

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looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes

point them out, im curious 

 

Where it says "24:00 hours access" I'd just use '24-hour access' (if you decide to put the words on top of each other it doesn't have to be hyphenated)

 

And also: Customs Clearance (not clearence)

 

alright fucking spelling bee

and it was their request to have 24:00

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