Marko Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes
mlaK Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes point them out, im curiousÂ
Marko Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016  looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes point them out, im curious  Where it says "24:00 hours access" I'd just use '24-hour access' (if you decide to put the words on top of each other it doesn't have to be hyphenated)  And also: Customs Clearance (not clearence)
Josh|0MEGA Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 (edited)  looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes point them out, im curious   after surf air theres a comma and then an and. But thats not really noticeable anyway Edited April 4, 2016 by Josh|0MEGA
Bjorn Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 Looks very need my friend. Â Marko's 2 points caught me as well
Lolsor Posted April 4, 2016 Author Posted April 4, 2016   looks good apart from a couple of grammatical mistakes point them out, im curious  Where it says "24:00 hours access" I'd just use '24-hour access' (if you decide to put the words on top of each other it doesn't have to be hyphenated)  And also: Customs Clearance (not clearence)  alright fucking spelling bee and it was their request to have 24:00 1
Lolsor Posted April 4, 2016 Author Posted April 4, 2016 was expecting a picture of a bomb tbh nice try nsa
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